Neo Eclipsim

Just ya average 13 year old moron typing on his computer

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Got Potential

This book shows promise. Your plot is great and unique, but the writing style needs work. Everything is a bit chaotic/hectic but still readable. Just fix some types and do a couple of scrubs on the entire thing to change the wording and this book could win some contests.

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Wow

Man this book was good. Your plot was well defined, your writing style is really good, and I just barely spotted some typos. This book got potential and skill.

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Amazing

This story blew me away! I couldn't believe how intricate of a story you wove, and how emotionally convoluted your character was (In a good way)! The fresh take on the supernatural was quite interesting, and in general, the plot was brisk and enjoyable. It would be immensely satisfying to see a sequel to this story.

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Amazing

This is simply amazing. When I first stumbled unto this book, I avoided reading it because of the title. The idea behind the plot seemed so strange and different from anything else I've ever read. But after sitting down and actually finishing the book, I was blown away! I had trouble finding stuff to criticize! The metaphors and philosophical what-nots concerning life, death, and an emotionally stagnant state of mind were all elegantly described and the word choice was spot on. Character development was realistic, and your character's personas were shockingly accurate. Just go through the text with a fine-toothed comb a couple more times and fix some grammar issues and typos. But in the end, it's quite a good book.

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