Michael O'Hara

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Loved it and hated it as well

You write very well. There were a few grammatical errors here and there but not a lot, and the plot sucked me in life an industrial vacuum cleaner. For goodness sake, this isn't even my least favoured genre. You are clearly evil to be able to manipulate my thoughts the way you did.

Loved your characters and the plot line was horribly logical.

the old definition of tragedy as being something that boded ugly yet was going to play out regardless, kept coming back to me while i read your material.

Great work. Beautifully done. Minimal grammar and spelling errors, and I can't even pick on the few that were there because i know how many i commit myself when trying to hit a work count target.

Well done. Love your work.

Michael

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Love it!

Love your style, love the idea, love the flow.

I found the opening lines strangely "bumpy" - but by the time i finished what you have written, it occurred to me that this (1) may be unavoidable or (2) was intentional. After all, we are dealing with Chaos here..

I enjoyed some of your smaller observations - the differences between hugs being just one example.

Once i work out how to "add to my reading list", I will try to keep up with your writing.
Michael

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