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Unbroken

'Unbroken' is a story of a young girl who faces all odds in life from the time she is born. Her alcoholic mother who leaves her behind to be cared for by her grandmother, the gang rape which makes her pregnant and the fact that she couldn't bring Jasper, the rapist, to justice makes her a heart broken person. But her son, Jordan gives her some hope to live on. Their moving to Vegas give us some hope to be optimistic. As the story is still in its 4th chapter, I couldn't rate the story well. The plot is yet to be delivered but I loved her writing style and the flow she gave. I'm not sure I came across the name of the protagonist, If not, then perhaps her name should appear earlier on. I look forward to reading more of the story and do keep on writing.

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Fate

I really enjoyed reading 'Fate' though only 2 chapters were posted. Braden and Taylor's love for each other and how it came to an abrupt end was heart breaking. The plot intrigued me and I want to know what happens next. Overall, a great story that all should read. Keep up the good work! Thanks.

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Good start

This story has a good beginning in which Emma is going to college and accidentally meets Aaden. Since there was only a chapter posted, I'm anxious to read what happens next. It's very well written and kept me intrigued as I read about this young girl and if she should even fall in love with him. I'm sure this is going to be an interesting book. Thanks.

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Slippered

This was a very humorous piece of work that I enjoyed from the start to the end. The characters were drawn well with an intriguing plot. Slipper carried the story through till the end. Overall it was an enjoyable read.

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The Shoeman Curse

A very well written story based on a growing family, their struggles and a writer nurturing his dream in the quiet. The story within the story was very well done. The theme of death of a child with his mother unwilling to let him go touched me to the core. Overall a wonderful story. Thanks for sharing.

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Hallucinations of Normalcy

This is a story of war and the adverse effect it has on its protagonist, Harry. The soldiers have been subject to live killings and the trauma of being killed would always haunt them. The author has described the war scene very explicitly. Harry is being haunted by his elder brother, Richard who hangs around and talk to him in the trench. Later his other brother, Tom dies in the fight and he keeps on seeing both of them. Harry must be afraid of the war and he imagines both his dead brothers coming to him.
The first chapter was too long which could be further divided. The second chapter too short Overall the story has a good plot which made interesting reading.

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Love for Janie

It was a lovely romantic story that took my heart away. It's a story about love that is above everything and in this case race and hatred. Janie is the tender loving person who happens to fall in love with Chuck. Her neighbours show cruelty towards Janie and her lover and goes to hideous length to destroy them both physically and mentally. The other characters like her sister Julie, his parents and Fanny have been etched as warm and human. I liked the ending too. Overall a romantic story with a strong message. Keep up the good work.

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Stormlock

A very well written short story. I liked the pace and the plot of the story which kept me reading and wanting to read more. Though I do not read this genre, I found this story an interesting piece of work. Well done.

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Lost

The story drew me in through its story telling which was smooth and flowed easily. The sad announcement of the girl's dreadful illness at such a young age and her wanting to hide it from all except Brandon was quite painful indeed. I want to know how long she will be able to keep this a secret. Will she fall in love with Brandon and will this be able to miraculously make her alright? A good read so far. Keep it up!

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The season of the caterpilla

This was one of the most interesting story I've read so far in this community. The pace was good and I liked the way the different parts of the story with its characters was intricately woven. The emotions of love, loneliness, ageing and the dynamics of family relationship was brilliantly shown. Being new to the writing arena, I'm not an expert in technical skills. Overall an interesting drama with a satisfying ending. Thank you.

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Smile old heart

Overall it was a captivating story. The bullying at school was well crafted. Allen was shown as a hard core bully who changed his ways falling in love with Maydee. Despite some typos and grammatical errors I liked the flow of the story.

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Girl who lived in the shadow

You have a great beginning there and I also liked the way your story flowed along. You have a great plot going and I would love to read more. Despite some spelling errors which can be corrected, it should be a good read when complete. Good work.

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Graceland 101

I would have liked to read a precise summary of the 3 stories in the beginning to keep the readers in the loop of what was going to happen in brief. The plot was building up with the different POVs leaving me guessing what was going to happen next. The writing style was good except for some grammatical errors which can be improved. The dialogues should be in inverted commas. As this story is a work in progress, I would like to read more.

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Medusa

This was a very intriguing story. It had a good flow giving it an easy read. The author gave in depth description of Hong Kong and Japan. The story had a good plot and his writing style was smooth. Overall a great job. Keep it up.

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Forevermore

Since the work is under progress, I didn't know how to rate this overall. The plot of the story is yet to unfold. Some work need to be done on the grammar front. Otherwise a nice story taking shape there. Thanks.

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Missing

Two things that caught my eyes were the title 'Missing' and the cover of woods. It has an interesting plot of an adult woman missing - in this a mother and not the usual young boy or girl. Perhaps a stronger first sentence or two to make a gripping effect would be beneficial. The flow and the pace of the story was good. As the story is still in the making, I couldn't rate the overall story properly but this was a good start. I wanted to read more to find out the puzzle like the protagonist. Excellent story in the making - keep up the good work

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The great falling plan from down under

The story pulled me right from the start despite having read only 4 chapters posted. The first chapter was a bit slow but from the third chapter onwards, the pace picked up. There were some spelling mistakes which could be rectified. Otherwise a good story plot and I look forward to reading some more.

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Gunslinger

Wow that was a good start. Having just read the first chapter posted, I was hesitant to rate the overall story just yet. The pace of the story and the descriptions of the places was excellent. I was literally drawn to the scene and wanted to read more. I wanted to see the protagonist - so perhaps the author could have given his physical description too in this chapter. Otherwise keep up the good work with your superb writing style.

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Zagan

I found it hard to put down the book once I began reading it. It was getting dark and I felt scared while going through your story! Overall it was a good book and you've got an interesting plot too.

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Trouble

The story had a smooth flow to it. Except for a few spellings (e.g. waste for waist) it had a good plot. Overall it was a well crafted story.

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CRANE

The story has a very easy flow to it and I seemed to enjoy the pace too. Loved the way the story unfolded. So far the 3 chapters have been captivating and keeps me wondering what happens next. Keep up the good work!

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The Wright Life

The protagonist has been crafted as a kind person who cares for people who are suffering. Despite being a rich person, he is shown as someone who is a giver, one who helps the downtrodden. I wish there were more people like him in real life. The corporate scene was aptly described and the story's pace was good. Overall a well crafted story.

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A moment of weakness

A story of a guy finding out his girl friend was cheating on him when he was about to propose to her. She denies having cheated on him as she accepts the ring. There is only one chapter available so am looking forward to reading the rest of the story which could shed more light on the plot. Small grammatical errors could be rectified. Otherwise a good start to the story.

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The S Girl

Enjoyed reading this spy thriller with it's strong character (Saravi) who stole the limelight from the start. I liked the way she handled the whole story with it's plot. It was a thoroughly enjoyable book. Despite some grammatical errors which could be easily corrected, I am sure readers will enjoy reading the book. Keep up the good work.

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Stop wishing

I enjoyed reading the story of young people involved, especially their feelings of love and death. Some attention need to be given on the spellings. Overall it had a good plot. Keep on writing.

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Live Again

A very catchy ad interesting novel indeed! The writing style and the plot of the story kept me wanting to read till the end. She has a natural flair for writing. I'd like to read more of her books.

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SWALK

Sealed with a loving kiss - what a nice title. The story has an easy flow and I enjoyed reading it till the last word. A love story set in war torn Ireland. Despite death occurring at every nook and corner, it's gratifying to see how people learn to cope with it and find love to stabilise their lives. Excellent story. Keep it coming!

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Whispers of a Dragon Hatchery

I absolutely loved your writing style and the excellent plot - it kept me reading and asking for more. The story was well crafted and I loved the way you have described the characters, their outfit and of course the dragon. Please keep up the good work and you need to complete the story fast - am looking forward to read more.

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Lights in the night

I truly enjoyed reading this book. Your writing style was appealing. I couldn't stop turning the pages. Though not a Sci-fi fan, I enjoyed the plot. Well paced and interesting. Can't wait to read more of your books.

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Keep your promises

I enjoyed reading the chapter. It has an easy flow to it. The plot was interesting and the part when her sister is relating the secret - I couldn't stop reading the passage till the end. I want to know what happens next. Apart from some grammatical corrections, I found the story telling interesting so far. It's interesting to read about the vulnerability of the sisters. Keep up the good work.

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Hleo

Though this is not the genre that I go for, Hleo captivated me from the start with beautiful descriptions and great dialogues. Hannah was the normal teenager who secretly loved Ethan from the first time she saw him at the shop. I loved the author's writing style and her story telling skill was excellent. I wanted to know whether Hannah's father knew about the Hleo and would have loved to see him return to the story. Overall a nicely written story which is recommended to all YA readers.

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3 of 10

It has an interesting beginning where a breakfast meeting is set up between two important characters. It has an intriguing plot and makes me want to read more. The author's writing style drew me in. Thanks.

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Dude Smith

The story revolves around a rich and handsome Dude and his quest for the 'real' love. You can love and hate the guy at the same time. Though he may be flirting excessively even when in relationships, he does show compassion towards his various lovers. A well drawn out character who suffers painfully. He expects his women to love him despite his philandering ways made me wonder what happens next. Overall a must read romance.

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Nicely written

This is a well written piece of story and the author's writing style drove me into it right from the beginning. The pace was good and the characters were well drawn. It's a pity to find parents have a strong hold on their children especially Aileen who seemed to need help right from the start. The arrangement of shoes in her house, the way her mother taught her, made her what she had become as an adult. This made way for her family and marriage to break up. Roxy, who was abused as a child by her parents, was also a sad case. Overall I enjoyed reading the story and hope to read more. Thanks.

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Family Honor

This story delves in relationship between siblings, the protectiveness and the closeness between the brothers. Perhaps some improvement could be made in the narrative style to let the readers know a little bit on the background - but then it's only me. Drugs and alcoholism for youth remains a challenge and the author has described it in a nice way. Overall I found this quite an interesting piece of writing.

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Mystery of the fat cat

Since there was only a chapter to read, I could not rate this story well. I began to like the cat in the story and would like to read more. There were some grammatical errors which can be sorted out. Keep on writing and thanks.

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Masks of morality

A very well written book with messages to the world. The message of parenting, sacrifice, love for children, humanity, politics, environmental issues and career to name a few. Claryssa is every working mother in the modern world who is torn between her career and her family - she was lucky to choose the latter. Most women can't afford to make such choices. It's more so in the present context when almost every girl is educated and chooses to work. My heart went out to Alexandra - what good is all the material wealth to a mother who misses her only child. That was a very touching scene to read. Overall, as a mother myself, I found the story true and life-like and I wish you luck in your endeavour!

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A good start

The story has a good start and the pace was easy. Since there were only 5 chapters, I felt I needed to read more to give it a proper rating. I wanted to know how the story takes shape and what happens to Jazz and Nicholas. There were some minor spelling/grammar issues which could be easily corrected.

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The courage

This is a really good piece of work on war and its effect on the soldiers. Jacques is a tortured soul and I guess that is what war does to the young men's psyche. The portrayal of killing and brutality is shown very well here. My heart goes out to Jacques and the shocking experience he had to endure. I would love to read more of his work.

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The heiress

The story drew me in right from the first chapter. It had the right flow and the characters were drawn intricately. The physical attraction between Emma and Nikolai and her mother with her lover were exciting to say the least. The plot was intriguing as a spy thriller should be. Her writing style was excellent, except for a few typos which could be easily corrected. I will not comment on the technical aspects as I'm not an expert on this. Overall I enjoyed the story very much and would recommend others to read it too. Thanks.

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Always

A beautiful love story that has a good pace. Her writing style kept me hooked to the story till the end. The characters were drawn well bringing out true friendship, love, sadness and happiness so well. Overall this is a truly romantic story that is a must read. Keep up the good work.

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Wicked

The story intrigued me from the beginning when little Alyssa was traumatised by the scary scene in her foster home where Elisa and Janet are having a huge showdown. The domestic violence she faced together with 5 other young children living in that home with their foster mother was heart breaking. The poor kids had to witness the traumatic event right in front of their eyes.. The plot further develops when she witnesses the accident where she sees the dead man with a slit throat. As there were only 3 chapters posted it leaves me wondering what will happen next. Overall I enjoyed the thriller which has a great start.

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Better than that

The story was very well laid out. I liked the way Reye was portrayed as a hardworking student and worker until she felt she lost her way when she fell in love with Nick. She gave her all to their clandestine relationship knowing fully well of her lover's double timing with his other girl friend. Nick couldn't make his decision to choose her over the other girl and Reye was right to make hers in the end. A very touching novel indeed. Overall a must read for all romance lovers. Thank you Flora.

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Silex

The first para really drew me in when the author describes the woman's soft peaceful features and suddenly I understand she's dead and lying on the snow. I also liked the phrase - the contrast of red blood on the white snow - which tells of the murders that had taken place. Another phrase that caught me was 'youth still lived on his face'. These were beautifully crafted words and paved way for the plot to take its course. The author' writing style is descriptive and poetic. I look forward to read what happens to Lotharan and Morgan. Overall a great start and a wonderful piece of work.

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Interesting start

I found the story plot very intriguing. It has a good pace which flowed easily into the chapters. I would have loved to see what Sulleyna looks like together with the other characters like Thor and her mother. The beginning of the story is now set and I'd love to read more. I could not give a better rating as there are only few of them posted now. So far so good.

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Interesting start

The 5 chapters have given an interesting start to the fantasy adventure novel. Though I am not into fantasy genre, I found the pace of the writing to be smooth. The characters intrigued me. It left me wanting to read more. The author' writing skills were up to the mark and his writing style was captivating.
Overall a must read for all.

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Killer Antonio

The story line and its plot kept me intrigued throughout. It was very well written with a smooth pace. The characters were well portrayed. I would like to read more from the author. Well done.

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Warrior of carnage

The story has an interesting plot with a good beginning. The writing style was captivating. Being a draft, there were some grammatical errors which can be rectified. Otherwise I found the story worth reading for and look forward to read more.

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Nobody's boy

The author's writing style came out to me as very crisp. It made me keep on reading effortlessly. It has an interesting plot. It makes me wonder what will happen next, whether the pig will eventually be destroyed and most of all whether the kids will regain their normalcy at all now that the doctor has died. Very interesting piece of work and I have thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work.

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Heat

This story took me to Africa and the people living out there. I learnt a bit about Apartheid and the author's views about the strangeness of the land. It was filled with emotions and feelings of love, lust and emptiness of it all. Mariah's sufferings were unbearable in her quest of love and understanding of herself. Some paras brought out poetry in itself. Most of all the domestic and sexual violence she experienced as a child showed up in her adult life. It's a good read and I've enjoyed the story.

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Dave

I found the story took off with a good start and the overall pace was good too. The father-daughter relationship was very close. The aliens got me excited till the end. Overall I liked the author's story telling.

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Young Prophet

The strength of the story lies in its excellent narration. The pace was smooth and I was taken to a different place. The plot of the story was interesting and seemed to flow effortlessly to the other chapters. I would definitely love to read more his works. Some grammatical improvement should be taken but I feel that the idea of the story plays the key role. Keep up the good work.

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New

The story has a good plot and has an equally good reading pace. The characters seem real to me. I wanted to see more physical description in order to relate further. So far the beginning 9 chapters have been interesting leaving me wanting to read more. Keep up the good work.

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Secrets on the wall Book 1

The story had a good plot and I enjoyed reading it. The part when the girls' got into the paintings was really intriguing. The characters came out well and alive. For me it was delightful reading going back to my childhood era.

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An Assasin's tale

A highly entertaining novel. Enjoyed reading it from start to finish. It felt as if the author was telling his own story to a greater extent and felt like watching a Hollywood thriller. Absolutely loved it.

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Port Summerville

Absolutely brilliant piece of work. The author's sense of humor on a strong topic was simply amazing. The writing style was smooth. I enjoyed reading this piece and would definitely recommend it to other readers.

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Before the healing

The story had a good pace and an easy flow which made reading enjoyable. It had an interesting plot of romance as an undercurrent throughout the story. Macy was portrayed as a sweet and lovable young girl. She was searching for love till the end of the story. The dialogues were well written. I would love to read more of her writings in the future.

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Searching for Eden

A thoroughly engaging story. I was hooked from the beginning to the end. It was beautifully written and the characters came out alive in the story. For me it was more like watching a cinema unfold itself. I look forward to reading more of his work.

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Nights with the bitch

A nice beginning to the story. Only 4 chapters has been posted so far so it's a bit too early to say how the story goes. The story is well paced and I want to read more when you are done. Keep up the good work.

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Too far to return

A most enjoyable book. I was taken to an island and lived there for a while with Elle and her neighbour. The author's style of writing could draw most readers into the story. The ending was superb. The aging process, the loneliness and loss of loved ones is a universal theme and the author has captured this in a beautiful way.

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Winter's Song

I enjoyed reading the lives of various individuals living in New Zealand. Their youth, family, struggles and old age have been brilliantly portrayed. The details of the characters' lives and their stories have been recorded meticulously. The Winter's Song sounds like the perfect place to be in our twilight years. Beautiful piece of work.

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The fire

A story of an everyday person. Loved the way the office was described in all it's 'grayness'. In the end it's only the family that matters. In this story, his wife and child were both saved to begin a new life afresh. A sense of optimism prevailed. Your writing style is superb. I want to read more from her.

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A new beginning

A touching story indeed! Poverty and its effect on a family has been projected beautifully. The author has been successful in bringing about feelings of love and hardship. She has set the stage for a strong novel. I look forward to reading more. I'm sure the technical side could be brushed up easily.

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At the mercy of mother nature

Very apt description of the nature's calamities. I felt myself thrown directly into the storm and the people's sufferings thereafter. It shows how weak we people are and how we have forgotten to live with nature. While the Apaches are still in contact with nature and the sounds of the approaching calamities. I like the way you have brought love into the story and thus hope too.

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Diary of a lost girl

I was pulled into the story right from the start. The story telling pace was excellent. Love and emotions were written in a smooth manner. It was a beautiful love story with a satisfying ending. The characters felt real and alive. I would love to read more of her stories.

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The bad project

I found the story of Marianne and Crystal rather captivating. It kept me turning the pages wondering how 'bad' the project was going to be. I guess one can't plan human feelings and this story tries to tell us just that. This is excellent reading.

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The lost souls of Gilfords Falls

A rather interesting drama from the start to finish. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. The plot was captivating. Interesting to note how cruel people can get in their quest for wealth. I would like to read more of her works. Keep up the good work, NRF.

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Thee fat singletons

Very fresh and interesting read. I couldn't keep it down for later. I enjoyed the way the story flowed seamlessly. Keep up the good work

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MAY

I enjoyed reading the book with its interesting characters. It was nice to picture kids growing up through their childhood towards their teens. The agony of bullying in school was well portrayed as well as the love between the siblings too. Thanks.

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