Laraine Smith

Greencastle, Indiana

I have Cerebral Palsy, but the Internet has made it possible for me to fly farther than I ever dreamed..

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"May (A blessing)" made me feel loved.

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Realistic story.

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I enjoyed the school experiences here. Please just try to keep your paragraphs together and use more hyphens. :)

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My mom's sister used to be a missionary! :)

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Wow! Beautiful! True artistry! :)

Write for a living! :)

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Certainly realistic! :)

Definitely soap opera material! Great work! :)

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I see this getting published!

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I enjoyed this story.

It reminded me of James Barbour's childhood's imagination. :)

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Exciting!

The prologue is beautiful.

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This story made me feel. I loved Mariana.

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OMG! LOL!

This brightened my Thanksgiving! You only misspelled Deborah's name.:)

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Alive and visual!

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Movie material :)

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A winner!

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The first chapter is both alive and visual!

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Wow!

This story is so sad and tragic. But it would make a great movie! It grabs me that much! Keep up the good work!

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A Terribly Sad Story.

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Powerful!

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Powerful! This hit me hard! It is visual! You're talented! Keep up the great work! I see a movie here!

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This reminds me of TV! :)

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This would make a great movie!

This is a such a sad story, I know what it is like to live with secrets. My dad abused me. Keep up the great work!

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The perfect makings of a horror movie!

This story very much reminds me very much reminds me of the movie "Halloween!" This is perfect for me since this holiday is coming up!

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You are off to a great start!

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This is such a sad story. :(

My only suggestion is to bookmark www.grammarcheck.net. The diary. entry reminded me of a song that James Barbour sang in "Dracula, The Musical" called "The Longer I Live." Donna reminded me of the Sargent Hulka from the movie "Stripes!" The part where the man went through the exercises reminded me of the song "Impossible Dream," which is another song from James Barbour's CD "Bring Me Giants!" :)

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This story is alive!

My only suggestion for you is to bookmark www.grammarcheck.net. As an American nursing home resident, I can only dream of traveling to Europe! I was so lucky to find this story! This is a sweet one!

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Wow!

My only suggestion on the grammar is to use www.grammarcheck.net. I have it bookmarked on Google Chrome. I see myself in the determination in this beautiful story! I have Cerebral Palsy, and I have dreams that I have been working hard for, too! The humor made me laugh!

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Wow!

This story deserves to be published and made into a movie! It should be labeled a comedy-drama! You are true writer/artist! The comedy made me laugh! out loud! The atmosphere made me forget it was summertime! Keep up the great work!

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Wow!

This should be made into a movie! This story is alive! I enjoyed the humor here! I also enjoyed the drama. :)

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Wow! :)

This beautiful story took me touched my heart and took me to places I could only dream of going! I live in a nursing home. This is what I enjoy about the internet!

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Powerful!

I suffer from depression. This story is as realistic as it gets. This story is what family is all about. :)

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Beautiful and heartbreaking.

I can sense both triumph over adversity and determination here! I felt the ache and emptiness here, too, with the loss of this girl's loving dad.

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Great movie material! :)

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I like the humor and romantic passion here. Please just use a hyphen in the word "e-mail." :)

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Very artistic and visual! Action movie material!

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Heartbreaking

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OMG! Movie material! :)

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Very funny and beautiful! LOL!

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Wow! Teen fiction material! :)

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I love Ava. :)

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Realistic.

Heartbreaking.

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Visual, artistic movie material! :)

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Just like the song "Dream Weaver" by Gary Wright :)

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Beautiful!

Keep up the good work!

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LOL! Sweet!

You only used "him" instead of her." :)

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This hit me hard!

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This cheered ,me up!

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Realistic.

I had a bad home life, too.

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Funny and Exciting!

This is a winner!

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Boy, are you talented and and artistic.

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Enjoyable!

Funny and wonderful. Please just bookmark www.online-spellcheck.com. It helps me. :)

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This is funny!

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You are a beautiful artist!

Write for a living! :)

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Movie-material!

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The first chapter reminds me of the song "I Guess I Loved You" by Lara Fabian! :)

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This should be a movie! Keep up the great work!

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This story is both beautiful and out of this world! Make it a movie!

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Sweet First Chapter

I love Hugh and Emma. I thought of Putnam County Comprehensive Services' Art Program. :).

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Gutsy!

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This story has attitude written all over it! The picture you chose for your cover brings out your artistry!

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This gave me the giggles!

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Wow!

You are truly an artist! Keep up the great work! Greatness is your destiny! Never give up on yourself!

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This story made me feel.

My heart is breaking for this woman. Please give this story a happy ending. I feel the same pain when my computer goes bad.

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Wow! You are talented!

This is like a movie! I felt I like I was watching the Styx movie "Kilroy Was Here!" Keep up the great work!

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Wow! Charming!

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This was painful to read.

I see myself in this. Kids bullied me in school. My late dad abused both me and my mom, too. My only suggestion would be to bookmark www.grammarcheck.net. :)

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Beautiful.

"Wishing on a star" is a beautiful poem. It breaks my heart. Wow! Thanks for giving it a happy ending! My only suggestion is to bookmark www.grammrcheck.net. :)

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This should be a movie!

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W0w! :)

This is a both beautiful and visual story! My only suggestion would be to bookmark www.grammarcheck.net, :)

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LOL!

I enjoyed seeing Shyla put that kid in his place! I also enjoyed seeing the crowd get excited earlier when quietly excited when she won!

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This is a familiar situation!

This reminds me of a CBS Schoolbreak Special called "Please God! I'm Only 17!" This was a about a teenager who was on top of the world until he died after being careless behind the wheel. He thought he was immortal. :(

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LOL!

In addition to being humorous, this story is visual! This is also a beautiful story. Keep up the great work! :)

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You are a beautiful person!

I hope to see more of your honesty in your future writings! Keep up the honesty! It is what makes you beautiful!

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Thanks for writing this story.

I was also a victim of verbal, physical, and sexual abuse by my father. One time, he threatened to beat me with a belt. This story enabled me to talk about it. Thank you. :)

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Wow! Beautiful!

You are a true artist! This beautiful story was visual keep up the great work! It deserves to be published!

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Wow! Sweet!

You are a true artist! This story reminds me of the two movies "The Neverending Story" and "Enough!" It also reminds me of the song "You're Not From Here" by Lara Fabian! It even reminds me of Dennis DeYoung's musical adaptation of Victor Hugo's "The Hunchback of Notre Dame!" I see the empowerment of a woman here! :)

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Wow! :)

This story is both intense and beautiful! Keep up the great work! It touched the center of my emotions!

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Wow! :)

Your story is both sweet and beautiful! You are a true artist! Keep up the great work! I also love the picture that you chose for your book! :)

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Wow!

This story reminds me of Dennis DeYoung's musical adaption of "The Hunchback of Notre Dame" by Victor Hugo!

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This should made into be a movie!

I fell in love with the picture you chose for your book the first time I saw it! You are a true artist! I live in a nursing home. Your story took me to place I could only dream of going! Keep up the great work! :)

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Childhood Innocence!

This reminded me of a Hallmark Channel Christmas movie called "Help For The Holidays!" I love the little boy's innocence and love for the Christmas holiday! :)

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Powerful!

This story made me feel! It reminded me of the movie "A Christmas Story!" It was really visual! You are talented! :)

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OMG! This is a magical story! It lifted me up after a rough day! You should do this for a living! Never stop!

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Powerful!

This should be a movie! You are talented! It is that good! Keep it up! It is visual! It grabbed me! Don't give up!

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Promising!

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Beautiful story. :)

This reminded me of my favorite singer James Barbour. :)

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Wow! Very visual!

This is action movie material!

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Wow! :)

The picture! you have chosen for your book proves that you are an artist! I know what it is like to struggle with a secret, I was abused by my dad. I'm glad you wrote this story. It made it possible for me to talk about. it.

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