I loved it, even though it made me feel a few things I didn't want to feel (sniffle). It brought back memories of my depression. You have a gift for engaging the reader and making them feel something. Are you planning on Publishing this? Because once you give it a couple rounds of edits, it will be absolutely perfect. Just needs some polishing. Overall, you had me hooked at the first page. Good work!Read the story now
A Beautiful Story For All Ages
I really enjoyed reading this story. I read it in two days! I can't wait for it to be published! I think the author (you) wrote a well thought out novel. Aside from a few minor things that will be fixed with editing, I found it very moving and emotive. I won't give it away (for the people who haven't yet had the pleasure of reading it), but some of the twists were definitely a complete shock! I find novels unusually predictable for the most part, but this one is different. I really loved all the characters, except the bad guys of course. I hope when you get it published that you will be successful as an author. I see great potential in your work so far. I wish you good luck and am very excited to see what happens in book 2! Good work!Read the story now
This story is absolutely amazing. It's not the usual type of thing that I read, but I love your storytelling abilities. It pulled me in and left me wanting more. Definitely a must read. Practically flawless in the execution. Great work. It's a must read!Read the story now
Has Potential To Be Wonderful
It's a good storyline so far. The only issues I had were the run on sentences and the dialogue being kind of robotic. I loved the character descriptions, which seem to be your strength. Stick with it, practice makes perfect!Read the story now
This is one of my favorite stories on Inkitt, hands down. I couldn't believe how well thought out the plot was. The author's writing style really kept me glued to the page....well screen in this case. I can't wait to read the sequel! You have a gift my dear. Keep it up. Hope to see you on the bookshelves soon!Read the story now
You've got me hooked on your words. I need them like I need air, water and food. I haven't read very far into this, yet I'm entranced. It's a very original plot, I thought, and the characters seemed to live and breathe as I read along. Your storytelling skills are superb and I can't wait to continue reading. I'm in love. Great work!Read the story now
I was entranced from the first word. You've sucked me into the story and I'm addicted to your words. I can't seem to tear myself away from the story, except to write this review. Well done! You are a wonderful, talented storyteller and I to see how it all ends. It's completely original. Genius!Read the story now
I really loved the way you described your characters, they were very realistic and practically jumped off the page. I especially love your MC Ann, I felt myself getting sucked into her story. I was actually really surprised, because I'm super picky about books.
Your writing style is very elegant and fluid, which helped to keep my attention. I can't wait to read more to see what happens to Annaldra. Well done! There are very few minor mistakes that can be fixed to make it polish even more. You should be very proud of what you've written this far.
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