Joshua Carr

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The BOG: King of the Swamp

Well, that was something. If you like Sharknado, you'll love this book!
It was a very unique story, featuring a snake with political aspirations who takes action to protect his home and the boy he has grown to love. As an amateur zoologist, I immensely enjoyed the descriptions of the variety of snakes included in the book. It is easy to feel the affection between the boy and his badass serpent friend.

If I could make a suggestion or two:
You may want to split some of your paragraphs up a little more. They tended to run on on occasion.
Upon finishing, I was a bit confused regarding the "Romance" tag.

Overall, a very interesting and suspenseful story. With a little attention given to punctuation and grammar, this could be a real hit in the proper niche!

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