John Kilkelly

Philadelphia PA

John Kilkelly is the author of The Phoedrus Elevator and the upcoming story The Lament of the Iceman. He enjoys Guinness and meat pies and long walks on the beach..

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Waves Break On Unknown Shores

I'm about halfway through and am enjoying this story more than any other I've found on this site, including most of the winners! It has a sparse, quick style and hustles you through. That's not an easy thing to achieve. The characters are well-formed and credible. There's some jumping between timelines but it's never confusing to the reader. Looking forward to more.

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Demon Dusted

I like the plot and I like the pace. Grammar gets a bit wobbly but that can be fixed. Interested in seeing how things develop!

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