infonation123

Florida

Someone who loves to read and decided to try and write.

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Great start

This is a great start to an equally great story. The plot is fine but don't you think that you should make the story a bit more intense I understand that it is only the first few chapters but hopefully the next chapters will be more intense that will add more to the story and how it reaches out to the readers. Best of luck in your start as a writer. In chapter 4 there's a bit of grammar error but other than that grammar is fine.

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Great start

This is a great start there are no grammar mistakes. This story has potential but this is my honest/ personal opinion but the first chapter is a bit stereotypical. The guy cheats the girl doesn't break and then she finds someone that's rich. This can lead readers to think that it will be like all the rest of the stories. My suggestion Is to do something that is still your story and the plot that you want but not as stereotypical. If you ever need me to do other reviews let me know I will be happy to. Best of luck with your career. Also, how do you have no grammar mistakes pls let me know.

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good start

This story is off to a good start. You need to work on the grammar a little bit and I was confused about the story. Also, add a bit more to the summary so that readers can get a feel on what the story is about. The plot also needs to improve. I cannot wait to see where this story goes

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best story ever

This is quite possibly the best story that I have ever read. the grammar is a problem but overall this is a good story if the grammar was fixed then it would become even better.

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looks good

it looks good so far. there seem to be no errors and that's great. you have serious potential as a writer.

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so amazing

this book is really great so far. there are some grammar mistakes though.if those were fixed then the story would be even greater. I can't wait to read more of it.

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going somrwhere

I think that this story could go somewhere you just have to fix some grammar errors which are a lot. I think that this story could be great if you fixed the grammar.

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great direction

this story is great but the grammar needs some help. there only a few mistakes here and there. i cannot wait to see where this story goes.

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It has potential

I think that your story is great I really do. but it doesn't give me feeling like every time I read something I feel.
Your story needs to dig deeper I feel like if you went deeper with it than it would be a 5 out of 5 story. You have potential as a writer you just need to dig deeper. It is one of the most interesting things that I have ever read and I look forward to more of your work and growth as a writer.

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great start

This is a great start. The story is great and there seem to be no grammar mistakes. Can't wait to see where this story leads. I don't know what happened but I did give you a review.

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great

This is a sad but great story. There are some grammar mistakes but they can be fixed. This truly very great can't wait to see Isabelle grow from this and realize that we can't control things like this.

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relate

This is such a great book. It hits all the points of a teenage girl from insecurities down to the looks. I think that a lot of people could relate to this book.

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Great book

This seems like a great book so far. It's stereotypical but it's also different at the same time. Best of luck with your writing career.

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good start

This is a great start but there are some grammar mistakes in the story and I am confused when that guy said that she left him for wealth.

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The truth will set you free but first it will piss you off.

This is really interesting. I understand the fact that you are trying to let out your pent up emotions through writing I can relate to that. Your style is kind of rare to find these days I think that a lot of people won't read it that much but those people don't matter, what really matters is the fact that you are doing this for you and no one else. There are a few grammar mistakes but those can be fixed.
Best of luck with your writing and hope that you find peace and happiness in your life.

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potential

This story has a serious amount of potential but the chapters are short and there are grammar mistakes in the story. If you fix these the story could become even better.

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Great book

This is a great book and it has a lot of potentials. There are no grammar mistakes. I don't mean to be rude or anything but I am pretty sure that you want to improve this story. These are only the first few chapters but in the upcoming ones can you make them more interesting? But this is a great book I can't wait to see where you go with it.

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interesting

This story is really interesting but there are some grammar mistakes. Based on the chapters that I have read so far I feel like you should write something that readers didn't expect that way they can become more hooked to the story. I can't wait to see where this story goes.

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great start

This is a great start but you need to elaborate on the summary more so that the readers can get a feel on what this story is about and there are some grammar errors but overall this is a great story.

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this is wow

I am so hooked to this story you are an amazing writer I see no mistakes. my only question is when will you update

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good story

This is a really good story but there are some grammar errors.

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great

this story is really great. I's funny and a twist of fairytales. but there are several grammar mistakes in the story. I can't wait to see where this story goes.

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Awesome story

This story is really great I was sad when I finished chapter 11. It is a good story overall but you need to work on the grammar and there are some words that repeat in chapter 10 or 11.

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great story

This is a really great story but I am confused about it. what are you trying to say with the story? I don't understand it. Your descriptions are really great. it made me feel like I was right there.

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