Gary Osborn

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Potential

I enjoyed the plot and story. I have my own issues with writing structure, and style so you aren't alone. I was told to keep writing and I give you the same advice. Strong plots and story are the most important as the other portions of writing can be corrected. Keep writing! I look forward to your next work.

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The Girl in the Candy Dress

I have seen this plot line before but what you did with it was excellent. Witty and well-written is a great combination. I really enjoyed it.

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