Faye Ophelia

Ohio

wonder

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Absolutely Breathtaking

Honestly words can not describe how I feel about this novel. Its beautifully written and well worded. The plot line has left me in tears, both sad and joyful. Never have I read something so powerful, its moving, though I dont believe that was exactly the intention. It honestly has changed my decision on being a mother, I've never wanted my own biological children but ive always thought of adopting, never was I set on it or fully anticipating it, but this has totally blown me away and shown me the beauty of motherhood and helping children. The genre is romance but this book is so much more than that, it's about love in general, romantic and familial. The author has taken my breath away and I'm honestly thankful for novel.

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Amazing

Absolutely brilliant! I dont have much more to say! But the dreams are something that most be spoken about, they kept me on my toes wondering what was real or not! 5ge book's insane...

In the best way.

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Amazing

Utterly aging, I love the mix of supernatural races and the interesting plot. The leads had character development and interesting made an odd pair. The way they display affection is quite comical. It's an amazing book and I'd rate it 10/10 any day.

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Iffy

To be honest, your ideas are brilliant, how you produce them is horrific. You have a really great idea and I can clearly see what you're trying to produce but at times its stupidly cliche and amateur. The plot has me hooked but the way you write needs a lot of help. You have so much potential. I love the book, but, like a lot of writers on Inkitt and Wattpad, you have a terrible way of expressing yourself though you have a wonderfully amazing imagination. You just need some work with transitioning, piecing things together, and getting rid of the awful cliches. The plot and idea of the book is bloody brilliant but you have trouble expressing it. I've never read a book with a plot quite like this and I love it. I wish you the best of luck, I have hope that you will learn and become an exquisite writer, reaching your potential that is clearly there. Good luck!

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The First of Many

Honestly I forgot the name of this book because I read it in one sitting. It's about 364 pages of action. It had a subject that I've seen many times but the plot totally changed what I had ever thought. The subject of what I would call an assassin has been something that I would read all the time before. But never in my life has it been so interesting. I've spent hours with my eyes wide open in the dark trying to figure out the characters thoughts and plans but the author has surprised me many many times with twists and plans that have never crossed my mind. Its beautifully written and doesn't have the support and love it should have. I've cried, almost screamed in anger, gasped in shock and fear, and most importantly I've smiled at the beautiful moments. This book is about friendship and loyalty as I've never seen it, there's familial love and mystery. I recommend this book to anyone that can read something long. Even if you can't, it's most definitely worth it.

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