Eleanor Suede

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Interesting

This is a very interesting plot! I read through chapter 3, and find the whole concept intriguing. Overall, i am very interested to see where this story is going and will continue to read more!

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Amazing so far!

Overall, I found this story to be very interesting! I was a bit disappointed that there wasn't more! I'm very eager to continue this story and discover what lies ahead for Royce. There were a few grammatical errors, but, in general, this was a good read! Well done!

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Really Good!

I read the first four chapters and intend to come back for more. The world that the author paints is one vivid and hauntingly unfamiliar. I am fascinated by the direction of this novel and am eager to learn more.

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I want to know more

This was a really relaxing read for me. The imagery and idea behind the first two chapters were extremely intriguing and the concept is not one that I have heard of before. I was a bit confused, however, at the start of the second chapter. It was not immediately clear whose perspective I was reading from...Otherwise, this was very fun to read and I think I will have to keep tabs on this one to see where it goes!

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I liked it!

I've only read the first two chapters (so far). As a christian myself, I'm fascinated by this concept. I think you did a great job telling a story as well as offering up some interesting food for thought! I'm interested to keep reading and to see how Ty's dreams continue to impact his perspective on his brother, as I'm already thinking that there is something amiss with Colton. Overall, you are a very talented writer and I found this very easy to read - despite, primarily, being composed of exposition. I find that its different to come across a story that does less "showing" and more "telling", if that makes sense. Well done!

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