Cati Branton

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Terrific Read

I loved your book! Very easy read and not many grammatical errors, which is SO nice to finally find. I was a bit flustered with all the names, but I caught on. I really love your main character and her ties to certain things. And the dragons/linking idea is brilliant! My only issue in your book were the confusing scenes. Like chapters nine and twelve were a bit confusing because there were no transitions. It just popped into a scene where people were talking and you had no idea who they were. I'd be super interested in seeing the future to this story.

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BoF Fan

So I'm a HUGE fan of Boys Over Flowers. That drama actually inspired me to live and teach in South Korea. I was delighted to see that you, who wrote the amazing Bloom, had written something based off of BoF. I also loved how you snuck in a quote from your own book! Priceless! Your sentences were a little hard to get through. And I didn't understand why you changed so much. Like why did you make Geum Jan Di rich? And did you mean for this to still be in Korea? Bento is Japanese. I really love how you kept the characters the same souls, if that makes sense. I want to read more, but I've never really been into fanfiction. Still will always be your fan though!

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Won't Forget

I really love your choice of words and descriptions. There were a few words that I didn't feel quite fit for me, but I think poetry is a personal thing. I really love how you've worded the first part of this book. Curious to see where it would end up.

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Lovely

So I really enjoyed this book. It was an easy read and the plot was great. The only problem that I found was that you kept changing from past tense to present tense. It needs some TLC, like all of our books, but I'd definitely buy this once it's published! Can't wait to read what happens next!

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This Book Should Really Be Published

I cannot tell you how much I enjoyed this book. Not only have I been laughing out loud at work, but I've been giggling and chortling as well. I loved everything there is to love about this book. I would have given it all 5 stars, but I found a few grammatical errors. I have to say, the sarcasm was my favorite thing about this whole book. I have told my friends and family about this book, granted my retelling it isn't as good as the real thing. I really, truly loved this book. Can't wait to read more like it.

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Interesting...

So I'm really interested in finding out more about the two characters in this story. I really like the feel of the story, but some of the things you wrote seemed to repeat itself. Like you don't have to explain her freezing her food and why if the characters are going to talk about it. Does that make sense? Otherwise, it was great! Curious to see what else you come up with!

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Dog-gone good!

So I really love the feel to this story. You definitely have an eloquent way with words, but I love that I feel like I learn so many new terms when reading your books!

My favorite thing about this story so far is the onomatopoeia. That was really interesting to read because it really added a lot to the character. But I was a little confused with what sort of accent Grundle had. He seemed to have something going on at the beginning of the chapter, but lost it.

I can't wait to continue reading this one! Added to my reading list!

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Slipper-y!

So I really like the idea behind this story. The eloquent language used is very pleasing to the ear, but after seeing extensive vocabulary after extensive vocabulary, I got kind of lost in it all. It's like Lord of the Rings or those fantasy books about rats. MANY people love that style of writing, but I'm just not that big into detail.

I really love your main character, but I just didn't get enough personality from him either. Again, the detail is great. Like setting up who he is and why he's there. But I got lost in all the details.

I really think it all comes down to what types of styles we're both interested in, that's all.

Beautifully written.

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Breathtaking

This book literally took the breath out of me. ;) I loved the characters, the descriptions, and just every single thing about it. It's very rare on this site to find something for me that is so easy to read. And I wouldn't change one thing about it. I can't wait to see what happens next! Please keep writing about the Hleo!

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Vampire Connoisseur

I LOVE vampire novels. I was super excited to come upon yours. I really love how easy it was to read. But then I started finding a lot of grammatical errors and sentences that distracted my reading. I think this is a great start to the book, but I think I need to come back when it's a bit more polished. Keep going! This is a great start!

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Intriguing

I was really excited and immediately wanted to read this book in a night, but I struggled getting through the first 3 chapters. The first chapter was the best grammatically, but there were a lot of tense issues and grammatically issues. I couldn't keep up with the plot or the dialogue because I was sidetracked by the issues. I really love your main character and what her lover sounds like, but I just can't read on. Keep it up!

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Interesting

I was really caught by the name and I really liked the main character. I also liked the descriptions you wrote. But there was just a LOT to follow. I got lost with your anecdotes about the animals and I wanted to know more about the dad and the affair. I like your style of writing, but I think it'd be better if I had more time to read it thoroughly.

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Thought Provoking

I really liked the idea in this short novel. I don't know if you're going to continue, but I'd be curious to know more. I wish there had been more about the time before and I wish I knew what was going to happen. I think the only problem I had with this were the run-on sentences. It was a little difficult to read because the paragraphs went on forever. Maybe cut them up so it's an easier read. Otherwise, an awesome idea and a wonderful start to a great book!

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A Kingdom to Follow

I really have to say that I was pleasantly surprised by your book. I really love how real and honest your characters were. I was a little confused with the time jumps. At first I thought they were all ten, but then you said it was three years later and they were still ten. I also got really confused because your tenses kept changing. And there were a lot of grammatical errors. I would definitely buy this book, but like everyone else's on this site, it needs a little TLC. Can't wait to find out what happens to Winston, Lillian and Vincent!

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Satisfying

I was really interested in this book! I love how I kept reading and reading. You definitely kept my interest, which can be hard. The only problem I had with this was how you grouped your dialogue. It was really hard to follow who was saying what. I'd suggest spacing out the dialogue. I wish there were more to this story! Can't wait to see what happens next!

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Outlandish

So this immediately made me think of the current TV series that's based off of a romance novel, called "Outlander". The names are a little similar. I really loved how different yours is. I only have one suggestion. When Scottish people talk, they don't use terms like the English. They say "yer" rather than "your" and "kin" other than "understand". I'd definitely do some research on how they speak so that they seem more real. Other than that, I can't wait to read it. The flow was great and the main character definitely has my attention!

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Love Wolves

I really adore the idea to this story, and you have a good beginning. But there are so many grammatical errors that I stopped. I got to Chapter 9. I also felt like the story wasn't flowing well. I love your characters and your descriptions. It just needs a bit more work.

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Curious, but lost

So I really love the descriptions you write, but it's a bit much for me. I got lost in all the details that I forgot what was happening in the story. I really like your two main characters, but they seemed lost in the story. I couldn't get a great feel for them. But your choice of words is beautiful.

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Wanting More

So I read the first chapter of your book. I really love the main character and Jimmy. I especially love the dialogue between them. But I found myself lost in a few of the situations. It started awkwardly in a conversation where I didn't know what they were talking about. And it went from scene to scene very fast. I also feel like some of the dialogue doesn't fit the time period you're going for. Jimmy sounded like somewhat of a valley girl when he said: "Like without another kill..." I'm interested in seeing where this goes, but I think it needs more work on the grammar and scenes.

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Couldn't put it down!

I really loved this book! You did many things I definitely wasn't expecting, which I find rare nowadays. There was a bit of grammatical errors, but that can be easily fixed. I can't wait to read the next one!!! The cliff hanger kills me!!! Oh, and I think Jared and Luke are the best!!!

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Tongue-Tied

I have to say, I was pretty skeptical at first. I wasn't sure I'd be hooked to another apocalyptic world, but you successfully hooked me, line and sinker.

I have been reading this non-stop. I loved everything about this story, from the memories of his family at the beginning of each chapter, to Matt's hilarious wit. I also loved how easy it was to follow, even though you had well over 5 characters.

A few grammatical errors were caught, but I would very much enjoy to buy this book once it's published - which it should be.

Please say there'll be more!

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Cati

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