catgirly93

Kolkata

I am a hopeless addict of contemporary, dark and edgy romance novels with twisted souls and alpha-male in the mix. And you will get a sip of that cocktail in every story of mine.

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Promising but a long way to go

Despite reading something out of my genre, I didn’t feel uninterested. As you have mentioned that the initial chapters require editing, I’d like to comment on the rest – considering.
Personally, I’d like to suggest a well balance of description and dialogue. Too much of anything makes it sounds slightly dull.
For eg. When you are introducing the Everard Eyles, instead of letting the characters describe, the narrator should right few lines about it. This is because the reader sometimes feels lost. It would be a great addition to the story if the readers are aware of the feelings, like what’s going on in the mind of the brothers.
Also, there were some scenes which were slightly abrupt. Like the fight or when Jack suddenly yelled and left.
One positive thing I noticed is that the writing gets better and better with very chapter. As an author myself who is writing the first book, I know the transition well. So, that is a notable point that you’re improving. Furthermore, the medieval theme seemed enticing.
Wish you all the best in completing the story and hope that I have helped you in pointing out something important. Lots of love and hugs!

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Hooked!

The blurb was very interesting which definitely got me hooked.
Beautiful plot and even better writing skills. I would surely applaud the author for executing so well. What I loved the most is the first few chapters are well-written and portraits the story wonderfully.

I am looking forward to read the next story by the author as well.

Overall, the book is great and my favorite part was chapter 19.

If I have to suggest something to the author, I would just advice to write in small paragraphs. Other than that, it is perfect. ❤️❤️

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Unique and Magical!

The name might not have attracted my attention, but surely the Blurb did.
One of the things I love about this story is that how unique the execution and plot are! Beautifully written and described.
The only problem was that I was a little lost in the beginning when I started the story; hence, I had mixed feelings. But once you move forward, the story enfolds brilliantly and I would surely applaud the author for that.
Overall, I am glad that I started reading the story. I generally stick to my genres but this was magically refreshing.

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Gritty and Gripping!

The prologue is mind-blowing – deep, dark and mysterious and surely sets the mood. I prefer stories with a good flow and well described scenarios and this is definitely one good story I have read so far. I love your writing skills and flawless construction of sentences.
Even though it is just few chapters, I can happily review and say that the story will turn out to be amazing one. So please keep writing and updating for your readers. I am definitely looking forward for more.

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A good read!

I apologize for taking so long for the review. I have to say that fantasy (vampire/werewolves) stories are not my thing but your writing has definitely made me hooked onto this one. So far it is a nice story and I would want to see how you, as an author, unfold the characters. However, I would really suggest you to consider the blurb. I found it a bit confusing and had to go back and forth to make sense. But the writing throughout the length of the story is flawless and without any error.
Even though it is just few chapters, I really found the writing style fascinating. The tempo is perfect and so are well-described scenes.
Keep writing and updating frequenting.

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Beautiful Read

So far I have enjoyed the story thoroughly and looking for forward for the complete story. Romance is my genre and hence it is an interesting read for me.
Except for Prologue and Chapter 1, the rest of it is done pretty smoothly and I like your writing style - simple, earnest and without any ambiguity. The background and dialogues are well-balanced and delivers an entertaining account and perspective of genre.

My only suggestion would be punctuation mistakes and a sight change in the opening of the story. I felt a bit of less descriptive text would make it catchy and compelling.

However, I sincerely believe that the credibility of the story does not suffer due to these minor errors.
Wish you all the best in completing the story and hope that I have helped you in pointing out something important. Lots of love and hugs!

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Captivating!

Despite being slightly predictable, loved the story-line and extremely intriguing! ❤️❤️

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