WilliamJordan

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Bollywood

You wrote a pretty decent story. I'm not a big fan of Romance though. It was interesting to see the Indian culture in your book, but if you want the book to be for a bigger more international audience, try to state a bit more facts in your book, about the places the characters are. I was hoping for a bit more exciting things to happen, story building to a climax, but from the start to the end, it seemed like it was all written on the same note. I don't know if the ending was supposed to be happy or sad. On the other hand, I think it can make for a good Bollywood movie. Fuller review here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PJ7ezhobzQ4

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Good Stuff

Not my kind of book exactly, but you did keep me captivated. The mistakes I did see were very slight and rare, in all I think you did an amazing job with this book. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YUg-lpFo2G0&list=PLVVd6C3gwfxauijZuXEttFdjW2i9aO3Jw&index=4

There is a link with my full review. Good Job !!!

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Awesome!!!

Great read, very entertaining, here is my full review: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=A5Z5coC2Xf0&list=PLVVd6C3gwfxauijZuXEttFdjW2i9aO3Jw&index=7

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Cool

Intriguing, disrupting, dark, morbid maybe... It kept me wanting to know more. Not the type of story I usually like, but this one I actually loved reading. Way to go!

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