StormySkies89

Melbourne, Victoria, Australia

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WOWSER!

I loved this! One of my favourite type of stories are the forbidden romance ones - in particular the student/teacher ones.
I loved Marcy and Addy's friendship it reminded me of one of my best friends and I.
Revel sounds like such a strong woman and also reminds me of a friend of mine.
Brittanny was the classic mean girl, every school has got one. So everyone can relate to at least either being one of her subjects or someone she has bullied.
The friendship between Ben and Marcy was so fun to see. I think anyone in small business hopes to have a boss they can joke with.
I really enjoyed the journey you put Gray and Marcy on. It was full of twists and turns, insecurities and dramas, that it made the audience as whole hold it's breath to seewhat would happen next for the 'troubled couple'. Almost as if you were watching a soap opera. As a narrator would say: 'The troubled couple realise that having no chance for a normal relationship, means having no chance at being together and decide it best to end it' - or words to that effect. But still it's very good and like Marcy's play would do well if it ever got published!! Well done! Well worth a read for anyone else looking for a tragic romance story!

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Good Start

I simply adore Lakyn and I can't wait to see how his relationship with Scott develops. I'm getting the urge to hug him to death! He needs Scott in his life like right now! Can't wait for more of this Charlotte! It's AH-MAY-ZING!

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OMG

OH.EM.GEE! I loved this story. And it is interesting that I like it so much because I don't usually read stories that have this particular relationship in it. I'm not sure why but I loved the way that Lena was trying to make it work with Quinton at first and then realized that she couldn't fight what she was feeling for Juliet.
Lacey was always amusing as was Scott.
Lakyn was just too adorable! I want to adopt him! He's was thoroughly enjoyable to read, and I'm betting he was just as much fun to write!
I think that only thing that had my brain hurting was the name of Georgia's husband. I'm pretty sure his name changed three times. He started as Matt, then Wyatt and finally Wade. I'm just a little confused is all.
But all in all this fic fully deserves to be published and I really did enjoy it. Well done Charlotte!

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