Samantha Lawrence

"Imagination is the only weapon in the war against reality"

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The S Girl

I can't say that I've ever read a spy story, it's not a genre that ever peeked my interest, but this book did! The pace is good from the start and keeps moving at a speed that makes you want to continue, There are a few grammatical errors, though they don't take away from the immersion. Well done!

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A Half Orphan

I enjoy this story! Ash's description of being a half orphan and not just saying "I don't have a dad" is beautiful and a poetic take on such a horrible situation. I love the dynamic between Ash and her mother, you can really tell they care for one another and Ash genuinely worries and feels for her mother's situation. Also, The line in Chp. 4 about Biju not resembling Brad Pitt or Matt Damon gave me a good laugh :P and I think the writing style is very pleasing to read and there are no minced words.
Overall, I do feel there could be a little more build up or incentive to continue reading. Personally, I just felt as though I was waiting for something big to happen as I read on and it wasn't happening. This isn't to say that I wasn't interested in the story, I just didn't feel any rush to find something out. I hope that makes sense!

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Seeing Scarlett

While this is a story line that has been done before and I personally have an aversion to first person narratives; I am really pleased with how much I am enjoying this book! I will admit, I've only read the first two chapters, but I needed to let other readers know that this is a book that shouldn't be ignored. The writing is very professional and you can tell the Author took pride in their work by looking over it meticulously because there are little to no grammatical/spelling errors. The way the main character Scarlett drops bits of her history flows very nicely; there aren't big chunks of boring backstory that make you want to skip to a better part. Everything comes out as it's needed and I love Lillian!

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Slave of Fire: The Weeping End

Overall, the author has a wonderful imagination, you can really see that through the writing; the environment and characters come through well. A small taste of this book will definitely catch your interest!
However, I feel as though the sentence structure can be quiet rigid and at times the dialogue doesn't seem to flow very well. These are things that are easily fixed and if they are would create a smoother read.

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Yes!

I know I probably sound demented, but I genuinely smiled at the end of this. Throughout the story my mind was racing as clues presented themselves and I tried to figure out what exactly was going on. Gorgeous description and immersion. I'm very excited to read more of your work!

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The Flowers

This is a beautiful story.
It's such a quick read yet I still had a roller coaster of emotions. The Flowers definitely makes me want to read more of your work!

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