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This was a mighty surprise

It is always interesting to discover the lore of other ancient tribes. I have read very little previously about the druids beliefs although their existence and small bits and pieces have been briefly mentioned in a few fiction books I've read. I liked that this was also understandable without a previous knowledge of the lore. Besides that I think the intro was quite long and the time with Yule quite short. But I still adore this story. It is so unique and sweet.

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Cuteness galore

The story was so cute though I think it was a bit slower going than the others - most of it was like intro and then bang the attack and bang the end. Also the dog was talking/thinking a bit more eloquently? than the others. I was surprised and in a few places in the beginning could only through the content not the expression style distinguish whether its the dog or the lady whose thoughts are given.

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Cute fluffy and funny

I think the end did not tie to the rest of the story much - it was just so random out of the blue. But the story is still nice fluffy easy reading. Not as good as Boone but still good on its own. Cute and nice.

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A good sequel

While I absolutely adored the Boone story I guess I did a bit injustice to this one by constantly comparing. The story is good but just a bit less ... it... I guess. I have no word for it... heartwrenching maybe... I mean it was intense and kept me guessing to the end - I even thought of Keath at the very beginning but then the spell wouldn't have let him in. Then I was kind of suspicious of Drew brcauae he was new to the group and got so little screen time. But Kim was so happy about him. Then I was a bit worried about Keith when he had to work late that maybe the bad guy will hurt him for revenge. In the end you still managed to totally surprise me. I think if I had read this book first I would have had less to compare. But I don't know if I'm s dog person enough to have started Boone story after this. But now I definitely give the next book a try just not with that high expectations as I started this book. Hopefully not a sequel of a sequel quality but a good independently readable book.

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Heartwrenchingly beautiful!

This is one of the moat heartbreakingly beautiful stories I've ever read in my life. Bittersweet but oh so good. I simply adore the idea, the supreme funny and deep writing style and the amazing characters. I can't wait to read more.

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The muses have been busy to help creating this epic masterpiece

I wish I could give 10 points to this awesome unparalleled masterpiece. The characters, lore and plot are so unique and powerful like a supernova in the depths of the night. I had read two other masterful pieces from the author and had this tingly sense of anticipation and a very high expectation about what I was about to read. But it blew my expectations to dust and exceeded them by an order of magnitude. Wow!

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Interesting

How cool is this fox lore. I really liked this idea. Can't wait to read the sequel.

The characters are quite simple and the plot too but it is really enjoyable to read it anyway.

I think it will need a bit of editing but it has potential as teen story although the characters are out of high school.

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So much werewolf goodness

I really liked the story. It did have an interesting lore and plot. The characters were easy to like (what a cool grandma) and the story did feel quite unique as a whole. I can only complain that it ran out too fast because I was really enjoying reading it.

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The mother of all time travel sci-fi books

This book has captivated me from the first chapter. I have been taken to an amazing journey through intrigue, politics, mystery and awesomeness. It tickles my brain to keep up with all the jumps in time and twists in the plot. You haven't lost me yet :) I think it has been a really nice excrrcise for my brain to figure out which hint will bring me closer to solving the mystery next and where to are you taking me to solve it. This has been addictive! So please update soon!

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Triangles twins and general awesomeness

I really like the depth of the story within all the crazy charavters and the madness that is the plot. There are crazy stunts and lots of growing up and romance in a mindbogglinfly awesome package.

I was hooked from page 1 and just could not put away the book. I laughed like crazy and yet it touched me too. Pure joy.

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Adorable

This started out with such a stupid part and then turned and twisted better and better. I'm glad I kept teading it. It was such a jeartwarming story in the end. I was sad about seeing Kaiden go, a lot disgusted by that stupid rogue and a bit puzzled how the curse was so easily broken but it does not matter because the rest of the story made up for it by tons.

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Amazing

I really enjoyed this story. The plot, characters, lore and the universe are very unique and felt amazingly captivating. I was a bit annoyed in the beginning by the very detailed descriptions of very mundane stuff like Timber packing things in her purse etc because I immediately had to wonder whether there was some hidden clue for a dramatic plot twist. For a moment it seemed to be too full of plot twist dramatic moments but I am unsure where ezactly I think around the hospital scene. Also if the Nephilim can bring back dead why not cure Chad. But all these small things aside it is a really goodzaž

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Love it

I did not like that they were stupid enough to let the heartache to go on for so long. Life is funny that way though - it is just too similar to me... I'm trying to grab my chance. Of course it is easier to see a solution to other peoples problems than my own. I do adore the fact that they do grow and have a happy end. It was just beautiful to see them finding each other. As in real life people do the stupidest things while thinking it is the right thing to do because others expect it from them instead of doing what is right for them because their heart tells them.

I hope to read more stories from you soon.

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Absolutely amazing

This has been a bit different genre from what I usually read but a real delight. I like the vamps being different from cliche. I like the intriguing and unpredictable plot and the quirky characters. The only complaint I have is that I want to read more but the book run out. I hope there's going to be a sequel and that Marcus will have a happy end too.

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Unique and thrilling

It is one of the most unique stories I have recently read. Kind of a mix of vampires and Dan Brown. Hours of first class entertsinment. A must read.

I hope it will get a sequel and that jappens soon.

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Cool

This was a joy to read and surprise after surprise kept it away from the usual cliches of the few books about girl in boys only school that I've read before. I liked the characters, the writing style and the fun lightheaded plot. Hours of entertainment.

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Unique and interesting

While I think the end seemed to be in a much faster tempo it could also be because I did not want it to end yet.

I like the overall story and it's very unique plot a lot. There are though some places I had doubts about.

If Mary was concerned about her plants and the weather for February was very mikd why did they not think about growing some of their food. Or where would they get cheese fir making lasagna when Laura joined them.

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Wow!

It is seemingly a simple and cliche plot. But the well flowing writing style and well paced contents kept me from going to sleep at night - I just was so curious what would happen next that I just couldn't put it away for the night.

I would really love to see a sequel or another story from the same author. It was a very enjoyable and captivating piece. I liked both the tech and the peacefulness and not utopia like perfect but in harmony with nature society of the cats. I think it has potential to write something in the style of the cats also evolving into a bit more gentle/open towards the males while building more contacts and connections with the Earth.

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