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Unique

I absolutely adore the unique idea and the very outstandingly different/unique characters. This story has captivated me and runs like a movie in my head. Amazing! Update soon! I can't wait to read more.

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This was a mighty surprise

It is always interesting to discover the lore of other ancient tribes. I have read very little previously about the druids beliefs although their existence and small bits and pieces have been briefly mentioned in a few fiction books I've read. I liked that this was also understandable without a previous knowledge of the lore. Besides that I think the intro was quite long and the time with Yule quite short. But I still adore this story. It is so unique and sweet.

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Why?!?!

I really lijed the book just not the ending. I kind of had a really positive feeling about Ske'toa throughout the story and to see her act upon her reputation came as a shock. It was awfully interesting to see how she took over the ship and how she secretly pimped it up. There was suspense un the beginning but then her positive feeling kind of lulled me into thinking that although she is a chessmaster kind of person 10 steps ahead of others that she was only up to good. The end seemed to come from out of the blue.

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Adorable adventure!

I absolutely loved this story. It did seemthat Crow was maybe a bit too contemporary in her thinking. But it did not steal the medieval flare the story had. I really loved the characters and the world you have built was also very cool and believable. I hope this story gets published as it flowed easily and had me in it's spell from the first page until the ladt.

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7 stars

I'm in doubt if this is a cliffhanger and the story goes on or if the slippery eel called Sebastian is finally caught. But the story is so unique in lore and fun it really really made me laugh in several places. I think it slowly got tedious that Sebastian always got away and the gag with him spying through Vanessa or Wendy got also kind of old after several times. I think it could be edited a bit. But it was fun and easy read that kept me on my toes and sucked me deep into the story. I hope it gets published!

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Absolutely fabulous!

This was a very unorthodox read! I absolutely love this quirky mix of female timecop, medieval quest and history - I can't wait to read more! I was glad she was ok in the end. I hope the sequel(s) will chase after the bad guys in 1990s and catch them eventually.

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So good!

I was reminded of my own story of going to visit and leaving a part of my heart in Germany. I know the finnish people are similar enough to their kin - the Estonians = my clan. It was interesting to see us from the point of view of others so clearly and how normal behaviour comes off as cold and confusing, yet is anything but cold or disinterested

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Awesomeness pure

I've rarely hapoened upon a nice spy-techie-con themed story lately. This one was such an awesome and thrilling reading that left me on an adrenaline high! I especially adored the twist in the end that was totally out of the blue. Yeah I did suspext there to be something fishy when the Research room was found in the FBI building and even earlier but both the reactions of Gard and Harding being a crook baffled me totally and the main culprit being suxh a blindsider... Wow. Most often authors leave enough clues that even if I don't realise the solution to the puzzle long before the culmination of the story (how booring is that) after the big reveal i'm left kind of grumpy for in hindsight there could have been no other solution. But this story is really rare because I was kept guessing until the very end and would've never come up with what actually was going on. To be honest I suspected Newman being a false player because she had so little screen time I did not know what she was up to most of the time.

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I wish i could give 10 stars

This was deep and good and tough and sweet and... well perfect mix of contrasts. Just like in a kitchen you may have all the perfect ingredients and an awesome recipe you still need to pull it off in terms of skills and talent. I think this story has it all and it does not just pull off but does it awesomely well. I really hope this gets published because it is a story that needs to be told, a story that touches something deep inside me that I hope will be touched in a lot of people and make the world just a little bit more compassionate and sweeter by this.

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Wow!!!

This has been an awesome read! I have seen a few documentaries about WW2 and the topic used here. All the coolest and craziest ideas of those documentaries plus the high tech of modern era plus a high speed chase across the globe plus the excellent writing style has left me in it's thrall from the first page to the last. It has been a nerve wrecking adventure and I just can't believe yet on the current adrenaline high that it is over... Awesome!

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Magical funny crazy cool

This amazing mix of tech and magic, military amd esoteric has been an awesome reading. I absolutely liked it in every way - the techies not letting the general ho evil, the general having a softer side, the lore and tech in this world, what went on in peoples minds, even the brain hopping did not get annoying or cofusing. But it sure feels like a cliffhanger so I hope there will be a sequel (I haven't checked yet).

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Sweet and adorable

I'm so not a fan of teen dramas but this was absolutely adorable. Sweet and positive even with a bully and lot's of hints that the bullying could get evil. But in the end it did have a happy end and a lot of cute sweetness

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Crazy psychic awesomeness

I think this was awesome, crazy and scary all at the same time. Dr Frankenstein and Dracula cross fiction just does not cover even 1/100th of tjis awesomeness. I would gladly read more of the adventures of this crazy bunch. I hope this gets published! It's maybe even worth a movie or tv series... Maybe another less gruesome case though...

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Heartwarming and thrilling

Both stories were short but very thrilling and extremely well written. I felt really connected to the characters when I read this and although I have no idea about rodeos and us marshals except for what I have seen on TV it was not hindering me in understanding what was going on. I also saw no obvious plot holes which often make me argue with the author/characters in my head about how they don't see how stupid this or that was. I really would like to read more. I hope this gets published too!

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I wish I could give 100 stars as r

This was one awesome ride that I don't want to step off yet. I hope a sequel is there waiting for me to read asap. It was really really hard to put it down even for a minute. The chase kept my adrenaline so high that I think I'm becoming a junkie for that now. Well the bar is high up for any next book that I'm about to read - it is hard to find anything as good though. I had been sucked right into the book from the very first moment and unlike many other books and movies did not have to argue with the plot and characters constantly about how stupid this or that would be. I was well entertained and the whole spy stuff was very believable from my humble non expert point of view.

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Pure awesomeness

Whoa I'm still on adreneline high from reading this! Awesome! Squared tripled or more! I especially liked that while the RATs are tough as nails they are not unfeeling, cold nor complete asses. And your leading lady can truly keep up with them both in brains and in physical toughness. Usually the ladyfriend is a stubborn clutz with half a brain cell in these kind of love stories (both books and movies) and people drop their business every five seconds to make hot steam for at least half an hour. Although I doubt a bit she and TJ would've been able to do half as much with half the injuries in real life I also know of crazy stuff people can do under extremes thanks to adrenaline. I still believe from all of the stories with this kind of setting that I've read this was the most life-like and believable. Anyway I really want to read more where this came from.

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Hilarious and so good

I abso-freaking-lutely adore the sassy characters, the crazy happenings in the cases and your amazing easy flowing writing style! I definitely want to read more from you. Both thumbs up for this piece - it definitely should get pubsished ASAP!

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Heartwarmingly awesome

In the beginning I was a bit doubtful due to the pop princess nickname of Chloe because those kinds of stories are usually teeny novels with nonsensical curveballs and barely above highschool drama. But as soon as I started reading this, that all blew out of my mind since the first page. The characters, the storyline and your writing style simply captured me in their spell until the last minute leaving me wanting to read more. Please do write the stories for Jordan, Mateo and/or Dario too. With the way you write I'm not even a bit worried about a sequel being any less good. But even if you write something completely unrelated I would still like to read more from you.

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Amazing

For the first time ever I can say that I've read a book that has mixed channelings (Kryon for instance) with sci-fi and action/adventure. Whoa what an experience!!! I can't wait to read more! It has touched me deeply and has offered me hours of being almost sucked into the story. Amazing!

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Cuteness galore

The story was so cute though I think it was a bit slower going than the others - most of it was like intro and then bang the attack and bang the end. Also the dog was talking/thinking a bit more eloquently? than the others. I was surprised and in a few places in the beginning could only through the content not the expression style distinguish whether its the dog or the lady whose thoughts are given.

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Cute fluffy and funny

I think the end did not tie to the rest of the story much - it was just so random out of the blue. But the story is still nice fluffy easy reading. Not as good as Boone but still good on its own. Cute and nice.

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A good sequel

While I absolutely adored the Boone story I guess I did a bit injustice to this one by constantly comparing. The story is good but just a bit less ... it... I guess. I have no word for it... heartwrenching maybe... I mean it was intense and kept me guessing to the end - I even thought of Keath at the very beginning but then the spell wouldn't have let him in. Then I was kind of suspicious of Drew brcauae he was new to the group and got so little screen time. But Kim was so happy about him. Then I was a bit worried about Keith when he had to work late that maybe the bad guy will hurt him for revenge. In the end you still managed to totally surprise me. I think if I had read this book first I would have had less to compare. But I don't know if I'm s dog person enough to have started Boone story after this. But now I definitely give the next book a try just not with that high expectations as I started this book. Hopefully not a sequel of a sequel quality but a good independently readable book.

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Heartwrenchingly beautiful!

This is one of the moat heartbreakingly beautiful stories I've ever read in my life. Bittersweet but oh so good. I simply adore the idea, the supreme funny and deep writing style and the amazing characters. I can't wait to read more.

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The muses have been busy to help creating this epic masterpiece

I wish I could give 10 points to this awesome unparalleled masterpiece. The characters, lore and plot are so unique and powerful like a supernova in the depths of the night. I had read two other masterful pieces from the author and had this tingly sense of anticipation and a very high expectation about what I was about to read. But it blew my expectations to dust and exceeded them by an order of magnitude. Wow!

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Interesting

How cool is this fox lore. I really liked this idea. Can't wait to read the sequel.

The characters are quite simple and the plot too but it is really enjoyable to read it anyway.

I think it will need a bit of editing but it has potential as teen story although the characters are out of high school.

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So much werewolf goodness

I really liked the story. It did have an interesting lore and plot. The characters were easy to like (what a cool grandma) and the story did feel quite unique as a whole. I can only complain that it ran out too fast because I was really enjoying reading it.

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The mother of all time travel sci-fi books

This book has captivated me from the first chapter. I have been taken to an amazing journey through intrigue, politics, mystery and awesomeness. It tickles my brain to keep up with all the jumps in time and twists in the plot. You haven't lost me yet :) I think it has been a really nice excrrcise for my brain to figure out which hint will bring me closer to solving the mystery next and where to are you taking me to solve it. This has been addictive! So please update soon!

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Triangles twins and general awesomeness

I really like the depth of the story within all the crazy charavters and the madness that is the plot. There are crazy stunts and lots of growing up and romance in a mindbogglinfly awesome package.

I was hooked from page 1 and just could not put away the book. I laughed like crazy and yet it touched me too. Pure joy.

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Adorable

This started out with such a stupid part and then turned and twisted better and better. I'm glad I kept teading it. It was such a jeartwarming story in the end. I was sad about seeing Kaiden go, a lot disgusted by that stupid rogue and a bit puzzled how the curse was so easily broken but it does not matter because the rest of the story made up for it by tons.

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Amazing

I really enjoyed this story. The plot, characters, lore and the universe are very unique and felt amazingly captivating. I was a bit annoyed in the beginning by the very detailed descriptions of very mundane stuff like Timber packing things in her purse etc because I immediately had to wonder whether there was some hidden clue for a dramatic plot twist. For a moment it seemed to be too full of plot twist dramatic moments but I am unsure where ezactly I think around the hospital scene. Also if the Nephilim can bring back dead why not cure Chad. But all these small things aside it is a really goodzaž

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Love it

I did not like that they were stupid enough to let the heartache to go on for so long. Life is funny that way though - it is just too similar to me... I'm trying to grab my chance. Of course it is easier to see a solution to other peoples problems than my own. I do adore the fact that they do grow and have a happy end. It was just beautiful to see them finding each other. As in real life people do the stupidest things while thinking it is the right thing to do because others expect it from them instead of doing what is right for them because their heart tells them.

I hope to read more stories from you soon.

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Absolutely amazing

This has been a bit different genre from what I usually read but a real delight. I like the vamps being different from cliche. I like the intriguing and unpredictable plot and the quirky characters. The only complaint I have is that I want to read more but the book run out. I hope there's going to be a sequel and that Marcus will have a happy end too.

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Unique and thrilling

It is one of the most unique stories I have recently read. Kind of a mix of vampires and Dan Brown. Hours of first class entertsinment. A must read.

I hope it will get a sequel and that jappens soon.

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Cool

This was a joy to read and surprise after surprise kept it away from the usual cliches of the few books about girl in boys only school that I've read before. I liked the characters, the writing style and the fun lightheaded plot. Hours of entertainment.

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Unique and interesting

While I think the end seemed to be in a much faster tempo it could also be because I did not want it to end yet.

I like the overall story and it's very unique plot a lot. There are though some places I had doubts about.

If Mary was concerned about her plants and the weather for February was very mikd why did they not think about growing some of their food. Or where would they get cheese fir making lasagna when Laura joined them.

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Wow!

It is seemingly a simple and cliche plot. But the well flowing writing style and well paced contents kept me from going to sleep at night - I just was so curious what would happen next that I just couldn't put it away for the night.

I would really love to see a sequel or another story from the same author. It was a very enjoyable and captivating piece. I liked both the tech and the peacefulness and not utopia like perfect but in harmony with nature society of the cats. I think it has potential to write something in the style of the cats also evolving into a bit more gentle/open towards the males while building more contacts and connections with the Earth.

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