Nitharshana

TamilNadu

Arise, awake and stop not till the goal is reached - Narendra Nath

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a lot to fix

As it is your first story, its fine to make mistakes. This story needs more work to be done. check with punctuation and grammar part. I could see lot of spelling errors in your chapter. Do correct it. Tat's not actually a big deal. I guess you have a great story to narrate. But to present the story well, you need to improve with your grammar, spellings and much more. No worries... still you can give your best.. read a lot and lot and get some ideas. All the best for your next work.

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Nice

you really does great job in developing the characters and intertwining each other. you also make the readers glued to your story by ending the chapters in suspense at times. Other than the grammar part that needs some improvement, u have done a great job. All the best Swesha.

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it is a extended blurb i could say

you have a great story. but the problem is... you don't have the idea how to develope it. Well.. read lot of books to get some ideas. you can very well write a novel from this plot.. just read a lot and try to write about the emotions, describe things and much more. All the best. Learn grammar a little and punctuation too needs some check.

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Good read

Well. Here is a great plot. A totally different one.. Story that has something to do with mortals and immortals... A story that has so much info about souls and spirits.. Wow. Great creativity.. One thing I just wanna tell you is...you just need to make your sentence crisp and better than it is now. For ex.. Instead of saying i was just tired you said, i just was tired. Ofcourse it has the same meaning, but thats not the very right way to put it as. And keep an eye out for punctuations too. Many quotations are facing the wrong way, used capitals at the middle of the sentence, etc. Other than that it is a great read.. I love to see how it all ends finally... Keep it up.

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Fine

plot is okay. But your story has lots of errors. keep an eye on punctuation and grammar. all the best.

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Out of reach

A nice narration of a girl who leads het life on her own. The love btn the student and the teacher had started... And am sure that the upcoming chapters will do a great job. All d best

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Superb

A great creativity... And I loved it... Finally. If all these jungle incidents are just a dream... That would actually disappoint me.. Anyway.. Am waiting to read more. All the best with writing

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Good read

It is a superb light hearted love story.. The way Aisha portrays the Muslim rituals are so real and natural. I had a good time.. But I want to be honest.. I am not attached much to any religion or god.. And i truely hated the idea of conversion. But anyways... Will read your updates.. Aisha may accept Darren as he was.... Lets see. Over all a good story...All the best.

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Awesome

The pain Ceres goes through is really natural. And i am really sad for those who end up in hospital like this. hats off to your efforts. its actually a good read. Other than some grammatical issues, the author has a superb writing skill. grammar can be brushed any time soon. keep it up.

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superb.....

with 1st chapter itself i was taken by surprise. Somewhat different and powerful concept. I loved the way the monster and the kitten are interwined. i think it is not an easy task to tell the exact mindset of a drug addict... of course at first, i found it little dramatic when viktor (a monster) tried to save her. But his younger brother sentiment had a good reason though.. and my only suggestion is..... the story can be little more faster.... So overall a good read.

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Good

It was pretty good... I am waiting for the love that Alice n Jake gona experience. And u have good writing skill of course. Best of luck for the upcoming chapters...

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Lovely

No words to say.. A beautiful love story.. Loads of love for this work

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looks different

Of all the stories i read, your one looks different. also i like your writing skill. The way you keep ending the chapters... good read...

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great

u made me laugh... and your title "Please invade my privacy" attracts me more than your experience. waiting for week 2

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awesome

i love fantasy. And a new thought with 7 princess... the humor that comes with it... everything is just good. i hope you will post your next chapter soon.

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kind of intriguing

"What happens next? Will she find her father?" these are the questions that comes in my mind. Waiting for your updates

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Loved it

i always love to read about Cinderella. And here i can see a totally different Cinderella.. i appreciate the creativity....

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Interesting

Am desperately waiting for updates from this story. it's way too good.

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Good

Great work. Though some chapters looked exaggerated, its a good read all over. Loved it.

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Lovely

Totally,this s a story that kept me glued to it. A nice narration of a true love story. It is a journey of mallika's hardship in missing her best half, a magic pocket watch through which she tries to get her husband back to life, but failed.. And a sudden and a thrilling encounter with time.... Karma was explained in an astonishing way..
Even though, in the initial part, it was bit confusing to understand which is past and which is present...it was actually too good as the story moved on.. Particularly after the old man "time" comes into picture.. Overall... I loved this story... Wow.. Loved your work.. Great.. Keep going..

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