The Guardians of Xegarath
Imprisoned, her lover dead, Rebecca angered beyond all reason, is freed by the guards. Seeking refuge in the forest full of dark gods, she is tricked into becoming one of them. She is given demonic powers. To test them, she destroys young and old, good and bad and hungrily devours them, feeding the evil in her. Mary aghast and in shock seeing her bridegroom melting before her very eyes runs from Rebecca's destruction, and is taken in by Justine, When the knights of light, come to Mondstown Mary soon becomes a knight. . . . Can the knights of light destroy the demons and save the human race from total destruction? I really enjoyed what I have read so far. My suggestion to make this story even better is to reread it and take out all unnecessary words. Example: As he munched on the brownies as he walked by, he noticed something huge in the sky. As he munched on the brownies, he noticed something huge in the sky. [This is just a suggestion, as I am by no means an expert myself.] I had a teacher tell me years ago that if the story was better for the line, keep it, if not delete it, as no one would ever know it had been there to begin with! Also please check your spelling, as in scene and seen, and other words that sound alike but are spelled differently. I look forward to reading the continuing saga in the battle of good over evil! NRF Author of: The Lost Souls of Gilfords Falls .
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