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Unique mode of storytelling

The author has a very distinct mode of telling the story, very much in the head of the protagonist and narrator. While at first it's disorienting, it starts to get its own rhythm, almost like poetry. You did do a good job of authentically depicting the insecurities and pettiness of young people. That being said, I did at times find the descriptions to be vague and the dialogue to be flat, but. Also, the terse structure with each sentence essentially functioning as a paragraph makes it hard to build a complete picture in my mind while reading. All in all, interesting, creative and unique.

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