I really loved this book and the many changes it went to to get where it is now. I.e, Rebel of the Pride to Dark Mountain, or snow leopards to wolves, yeah. It is overall very well written and advanced.
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Now, I must say I did notice a lot of mistakes in your writing. Nothing a swift edit couldn't fix, though. I reccomend installing grammarly into your chrome browser in your chromebook and that would make this pristine.
Also, I feel as if you rushed the first chapter a bit. What you wrote would be about four pages in a real book, and in those four pages some wolf pups snuck out, a deer was killed, a human was found, and Ayza was killed. It just seemed a bit rushed.
Lastly, please, I really do not want things copied from Lost or Broken! I saw you called them Protectors - Ahem? Also light against dark - that is something in both of my books. In Broken, there is a tree of light and dark, conflicting life that Diamond leads on (Chapter one.) And in Lost, the Pack of Whispering Stars against the Pack of Lurking Shadows - a concept shared greatly in your book.
Nonetheless, I will be keeping up with this and I am excited to hear the new chapters!