I stayed up most of the night reading it was very touching kind of bitter sweet yet so sad even though happy too . You write drawing interest as to not be able to put it down until read smiles so good on drawing the reader into the story . I am not a grammer police but in the begining there were some places that i had to mentally add a word or two in like the or something sorry cant recall but all in all very good and I am proud of you smiles .. love you my friend and love how you write and such, keep on being you as you shine !
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( I am posting this for my friend in the USA who is having trouble with her computer, she told me what to put in here and I am helping her out, Faithfully Glenn Brace , Author)