I don't even know what to say - I am in awe. It was such a brilliantly crafted tale, I was left breathless. The beauty with which we slowly realize that the man is planning to kill his beloved wife was gripping. The wife's attack on the man was effectively foreshadowed in the first few paragraphs. The man's initial separation from his wife seemed a little disappointing - as if their extraordinary love couldn't bear the pressures of the world which every couple undergoes. There was amazing subtlety in the ordering of the recount - the wife's first kill is described to us before their reunion (which was chronologically incorrect), which helped to instil the idea that the true horror for him was the initial separation. I wonder why the wife killed someone, I would have liked to learn more about that.
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The imagery and expressionism was beautiful. Every sentence had a grace, and words were used in such exciting ways to create new forms of descriptions. A few things I noticed which should be corrected are:
1) "Voice spills rich and aromatic" Aromatic is used for smells, and even by long stretches of imagination, its use to describe a voice seemed wrong.
2) There should be commas around "when the only worries were dressing attires for dances and gas money for weekend drives"
I loved the story, I don't know how else to put it. You should write more here on Inkitt. The concept of attractions was enthralling - and the last line left me gasping. Such beauty, the woman's attractions to her innate monster juxtaposed with her love for her husband. Bravo!