Bailey French

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The writing style was so good, and had a lot of emotion. I felt as though I was in her place. This plot has so much potential, and I hope you add more!

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Amazing does not describe it. Honestly, I could not find a flaw. The style of writing was unique and held your attention. The fight scenes had me on the edge of my seat, making me wish I was there. Each character seemed realistic and different from another. I loved it, and I hope there will be more!

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Each one shot had such potential. I wish each could be made into its own short story. The first one was a bit hard to follow, but the second one was amazing. I love how you captured the emotion. Great writing, and I cannot wait for more!

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The plot was great, and left me wondering what would happen next. It needs to be edited. The Japanese, though it made it a bit harder to read, added to the story. The dialogue helped craft an image of the scene and characters. Overall it was a great story!

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The plot was great! It was a great idea, and I wish there was more to read. The internal dialogue was relatable, funny even. When reading, you felt what the character was feeling--- his panic, fear, and anger. However, the story needs major editing. Some sentences are hard to read, and some words need to be capitalized. Other than that, the story is a good one.

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I loved this book! It is interesting from the start and holds your attention until the end. I only wish there was more of it! Aside from a few grammatical errors, the story is perfect. The main character is well written, but the 'soulless' part of her is not forgotten. Truly a great, easy, and quick read.

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This was an amazing story. It was short and to the point, and I wish there was more! The writing style was fluid and painted a picture. I loved the folklore and myths brought into the plot. This story has so much potential, and I cannot wait to read more!

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This story has great potential, and I cannot wait to see what happens next. The writing is good, however this needs to be thoroughly edited.

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This story was amazing! The characters were well crafted, each seemed realistic and different from another. The plot was so good, with just the right amount of mystery and romance. I wish there was more of it! The only thing that could improve was the arranging of the point of views. While staying in third person, the focus would switch and sometimes it would be hard to follow. Other than that this story is one of my favorites!

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This story was great. The only problem is that there is not enough! The writing style is amazing. You relate and understand the characters. There were not many, if any, grammatical errors. The story was fast paced, and left you wanting more.

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