Ash Thompson

Springfield

Aspiring Horror, Romance and Fantasy Author.

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Hello, I saw your request to reviewed. You only need to add one explanation mark and only one question mark. If someone is thinking or texting, use italics, it makes it easier to tell it apart. Also, to make it cleaner, don't do the P.O.V. Use the little fancy thing that has a line while writing, I use that to indicate a change in perspective, but for me, it kind of switches to what each person is doing. Also, show not tell. I had a hard time with that as well, I still do, instead of 'I'm getting angry' say, 'I could feel my blood boiling.'

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Wow

I've noticed a ton of grammar mistakes but considering that, this has been completely hooked, and I can relate to her. In my school, most have lost their virginity and it's weird to know your one of the few who still have the V card

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Really good

Being the reader I am, I have read all three books because I have no life and I have to say all of these books are amazing!

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I quite enjoy what you have published, but I find it hard to understand the plot of the short story. I do read confusing things I often accidentally make them myself. Overall, if it wasn't for the plot, this would be a great story!

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Hilarious

I keep laughing at Sol's thoughts. He is hilarious, his attitude on getting Rai- er, Wraths ass handed to him and just too much

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