Annette Spenner

Middleburg

I am a retired florist. Love reading, writing and early morning peace with a good cup of coffee.

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Red

This is a great start to what seems to be an intriguing story. There is one place that needs proper punctuation. where your sentence should have a comma but instead AND starts the sentence. I am looking forward to your next chapter.

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I WANT MORE!

I thought this book was very intriguing. I couldn't get enough. I am looking forward to reading the rest of the story. Please let me know when you publish the rest. I can't wait to find out what happens to poor little Mary. I hope she lives.

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