J.R. Rioux

Somewhere, Maine, USA

I write erotic romance, fantasy/sci-fi and action/adventure. My stories are generally not suited for minors and contain explicit sex, violence, and language.

Overall Rating
Plot
Writing Style
Grammar Punctuation

An Emotional Roller Coaster!

Needs some minor editing. This isn't your typical falling in love with the boss romance. It has much more depth, drama and hardships. The characters have to fight their own demons and insecurities, make mistakes and grow for things to come out good in the end. There are a lot of twists and turns that will make you laugh and cry and cheer them on. Well worth the read.

Read the story now
Overall Rating
Plot
Writing Style
Grammar Punctuation

Not Impressed

While some aspects of the BDSM are realistic, the author fails to take time to build up the relationship between the MC's. Shortcuts aren't acceptable in BDSM because of the potential risks. With a character as vulnerable as the female MC, author has failed to respect the most necessary aspect of BDSM relationships: patience. These relationships are not and cannot be rushed into. Sadly, this throws off the entire pace of the story very quickly in. There's no build-up to the relationship at all.

Read the story now
Overall Rating
Plot
Writing Style
Grammar Punctuation

Eh...

The plotline is good. The description is good. There are a lot of technical errors that can be distracting, but the main problem is that it moves somewhat awkwardly. The character development is lacking and there are a number of plot holes. Unrealistic responses are littered throughout, for example - a friend cheats on her mate with MC's mate, yet MC has no reaction after spending hours in agonizing pain because of it.

Read the story now
Overall Rating
Plot
Writing Style
Grammar Punctuation

Awesome story!

I am not generally a fan of short stories but this one is well worth the read. Of course it could be lengthened (in my opinion), but it's really awesome as it stands. It goes outside of the cliché, making it more original than the hooker meets rich guy story. I definitely recommend it!

Read the story now
Overall Rating
Plot
Writing Style
Grammar Punctuation

A fantastic read!

This story is a real page turner! Well developed characters, awesome plot and it's so easy to slip into their world and live it. A very fine storyteller, indeed.

Read the story now
Overall Rating
Plot
Writing Style
Grammar Punctuation

Why is this even on here?

There's nothing here

Read the story now
Overall Rating
Plot
Writing Style
Grammar Punctuation

Chapters way too short

Seems very rushed and is little more than 1 chapter spread into 4 parts.

Read the story now
Overall Rating
Plot
Writing Style
Grammar Punctuation

Worth the read!

The characters are appealing, the storyline is realistic and the characters emotions are easy to relate to.

Read the story now

No badges received yet

About Us:

Inkitt is the world’s first reader-powered book publisher, offering an online community for talented authors and book lovers. Write captivating stories, read enchanting novels, and we’ll publish the books you love the most based on crowd wisdom.