Extremely well written, with a nice literary style
I really thought Destined was well extremely well written, with a nice literary style. The pace was just right, and kept me captivated. There were more romance and slice of life scenes in than science fiction ones, but surprisingly it didn't bother me as much as it usually does.
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My only criticisms are that many of the scenes weren't as memorable to me as I'd hoped, which is why I scored Destined lower on plot. Maybe a bit more action or circumstance in the confrontation scenes would have helped to make the main character's encounters with Enoch more memorable. Also a few paragraphs at the beginning told us about the world and its history, and I would have preferred to be shown in another way. Not too many mistakes.
The setting, feel, and connection between the characters was top notch. Pleasant reading experience that uses numerous themes for inspiration. I've a good feeling about Destined.